Sunday, June 17, 2012

अर्धनिर्मित

यहाँ कोई मित्र नहीं है, कोई आश्वस्त चरित्र नहीं है,
सब अर्धनिर्मित है|
अर्धनिर्मित इमारतें हैं, अर्धनिर्मित बच्चों कि शरारतें हैं,
अर्धनिर्मित ज़िन्दगी कि शर्ते हैं,
अर्धनिर्मित जीवन पाने के लिए लोग रोज़ यहाँ मरते हैं|
अर्धनिर्मित है यहाँ के प्रेमियों का प्यार,
अर्धनिर्मित है यहाँ मनुष्यों के जीवन के आधार|
आज का दिन अर्धनिर्मित है,
न धूप है, न छाओं है,
मंजिल कि डगर से विपरीत चलते पाँव है||
अर्धनिर्मित सी सेहत है,
न कभी देखा निरोगी काया को, न कभी दिल से कहा अलविदा माया को,
हमारी अर्धनिर्मित सी कहानी है, अर्धनिर्मित हमारे युवाओं कि जवानी है|
हम रोज़ एक अर्धनिर्मित शय्या पर लेटे हुए एक अर्धनिर्मित सा सपना देखते हैं,
उस सपने में हम अपनी अर्धनिर्मित आकांक्षाओं को आसमानों में फेंकते हैं|
आसमान को भी इन आकांक्षाओं को समेटकर अर्धनिर्मित होने का एहसास होता होगा,
क्योंकि यह आकांक्षाएं हमारी नहीं आसमान की है,
बिलकुल वैसे ही जैसे यह अर्धनिर्मित गाथा तुम्हारी है और आयुष्मान की है|

40 comments:

  1. great poem sir! ardhnirmit kavita!

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  2. itz really great to read such poems.....i think itzz pure reality...just luv it

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  3. a good host a good actor a good singer now a good poetizer...

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  4. ये मनुष्य कि आकांक्षाए है, जो बढ़ती रहती है, चीज़े निर्मित हो जाये, तो और पाने की चाह में, उन्हें अर्धनिर्मित होने का एहसास देती है..

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  5. It's beautifully penned. And so true- how everything- our dreams, our expectations, our selves are always left feeling incomplete or half done. Thats probably because we start expecting so much out of life. Naturally, expectations kill joy. Rarely do we feel satisfied, in the real sense of the term.
    I love the last three lines. Such a nice way to end this poem.
    However, I'd like to make a correction- you've written "paun hain" instead of "paon hain". I suppose it's a typo. Nevertheless, thanks for the read.

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  6. good poem..close to the real world..

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  7. awesum :) http://www.vickyz.com/

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  9. You are a true person by heart, that's why only you can write all this ! Loads of love !

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  10. Superb Ayushmann !!! U too poetize ? it's my hobby.... and superb Hindi :D . Seeing this I could not stop my disguised poet.. pls read once when u get time :)
    http://beyond-d-window.blogspot.in/2012/06/exclusive-of-mine_4004.html

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  11. Great work Ayushman!! Proud to see that people still give importance to Hindi, apart from movies and shows. Keep up the good work and God bless :D

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  12. grt wrk ayushman bt your poem seems complete its not ardhnirmith !!

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  13. Chaa Gaye Bhai Khurana Sahab nice one

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  14. Vyakaran ardhnirmit hai,
    sharan hamaari ardhnirmit bhi,
    vichaar toh ardhnirmit hai hi,
    ab yug bhi ardhnirmit hai?

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  15. Superb!!
    Fantastic!!
    U are really great ayushmann
    hats off !!

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  16. You are so good at everything!

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  17. Really nice one.... enjoyed reading it :)

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  18. Nice poem..Super Talented Sperm ;):D

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  20. Normally I wouldn't have used a heavy word like "Ardhnirmit" in a poem, "Adhoora" would seem more appropriate. But it seems to fit quite well in your poem.

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  21. nice work... :) didn't realise you were an accomplished creative person... too good a work for someone in motion picture bizz...!!!

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  22. radha ka pyaar bhi ardhnirmit tha krishna ji ke liye....there is this beautiful song from an old film navrang....aadha hain chandrama...it beautifully captures the sweetness of incompleteness...

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  23. Very good poem, its words touch to the soul.

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  24. amezing lines.....please visit on my blog www.omjaijagdeesh.blogspot.com here a collection of my poems and articles.

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  25. You have written these? Dang! How long has it been since bollywood got hold of such a prolific (pun intended :p I just watched Vicky Donor :) ), varied, and talented person! And how am I just now discovering you?! Great going. God bless!

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